Persuasive Writing

In Te Maunga we have been learning to write a piece of persuasive writing. Our topic is Why Chromebooks Help/Don't Help Our Learning.   I think that I did well going  against what all the people said in my class. I think I could do better by putting more reasons in.
Here is my writing.

Why Chromebooks don’t help our learning.

I feel that chromebooks does not improve our learning because kids at the age of 5 are already staring at tablets for far too long.

My first reason is going on our chromebooks for too long is going to ruin our posture. Especially on the bean bags the chromebooks are sitting on our lap just waiting to destroy our body. If we are sitting at a table we are hunching over imagine what our backs are going to be in 50 years. TERRIBLE!!!!!

Secondly our sight might be affected by all the screen time. It will be on full power (all the brightness is on). If we are staring at the screen for a extended amount of  time we could become sightless.

Lastly some exams are written so we need to get the pencil grip before we do an exam otherwise we will not kill it.  So that means that we have to focus more on our handwriting so we can become awesome writers on a chromebook and in a book. Our hands are a very first-class part about our body so it needs all its muscles to be pumping.

What would happen if 5 yr olds were allowed to have a chromebook. I still think eight is too young. I am saying that parents they need to bring there time limit down. So what I am trying to tell you is that chromebooks do not help our learning and our health.