In Te Ngahere we have been learning to use metaphors in our writing. We were using this to create a poem about ourselves. Our poems weren’t allowed to have the word because or I. Instead we had to write Bella is… J. I think I could do better by thinking more outside the box and I am also writing similes instead of metaphors. I enjoyed writing about ourselves because if someone reads it the will get a better picture of what we are. Just so you know this is my poem and it is a draft copy I will keep fixing it up through the week. I hope you like my poem.😀
Bella is a marshmallow, soft and sweet.
Bella is a giant tree looking after the little bushes.
Bella is a candle lighting our way through our dark times.
Bella is the color pink bright and playful.
Bella is a mole, hiding from others and curious of the outside world.
Bella is a mindcraft character shaping her world and adventures.
Bella is a Chromebook fully charged and ready for learning.
Kia ora Bella it's Fonz here I really enjoyed viewing your metaphor poem you have posted on your blog. I really like this one Bella is a Minecraft character shaping her world and adventures. Next time you could say Bella is a candle lighting her way through her dark times because it was. Bella is a candle lighting our way through our dark times but that’s no biggie. Keep up the good work Bella.
ReplyDeleteThanks for posting your grate poem.